Star Trek: Renegade

[Captain Proton]

posted on February 20th, 2010, 2:17 pm

Last edited by Captain Proton on February 20th, 2010, 4:16 pm, edited 1 time in total.

'The year is 2394; the Dominion War is approaching its 20 year anniversary and the Alpha and Beta quadrants have entered a seemingly stable era. Despite the festivities, there have been reports of ‘rogue’ Jem’Hadar attacking Federation outposts along the Cardassian border. Captain Geordi La Forge and the USS Dorset have been assigned to investigate.'

Star Trek: Renegade will be my second Star Trek novel, and my first based upon the Fleet Operations universe. The novel will follow the crew of the USS Dorset, a Luna-Class starship, assigned to assist the Cardassians with a growing threat from rogue Jem'Hadar.

The Novel will theoretically be released in chapters, which will allow me to notice mistakes in writing and allow for you, the audience to intervene where necessary. It also means that the task won't seem so daunting 

I am yet to think of a way to release the chapters, so any form of doing so would be appreciated. I thought of a possible release on here, although the chapters will be too big.

Anyway, just thought I'd introduce the Novel. And look forward to your input 

posted on February 20th, 2010, 2:25 pm

Looks very nice... you could make a site like other fan-stories?

posted on February 20th, 2010, 2:27 pm

That's a good idea actually. I'm really hopeful of this, I have the backing of Optec etc, so I suppose a site could be appropriate.Thanks for the idea 

posted on February 20th, 2010, 3:50 pm

Slight change:

I've realised that there are characters I could focus on already, such as Wesley Crusher.

Captain Wesley Crusher of the USS Dorset 

posted on February 20th, 2010, 3:51 pm

Slight change:

I've realised that there are characters I could focus on already, such as Wesley Crusher.

Captain Wesley Crusher of the USS Dorset 

Hah!

Looking good man - I wish you the best of luck  :thumbsup:

posted on February 20th, 2010, 3:52 pm

[glow=red,2,300]NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO[/glow]

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i dont want him to be captain of anything

EDIT: ninja-ed by dom

posted on February 20th, 2010, 3:55 pm

Ahah, who would you prefer then Myles? 

[Myles]

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:05 pm

Last edited by Myles on February 20th, 2010, 4:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.

make your own character if you want. that way your not living up to peoples expectations of characters.

EDIT: but if u desperately want canon, then tom paris may have stayed in starfleet, harry kim may have changed and stopped being an idiot. maybe geordi la forge, he was a nice guy.

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:08 pm

Hmm true, I did create character of Captain Simmons, although I want to have some references to TNG, where only Crusher is a likely choice. 

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:10 pm

what about la forge, in voyager timeless he became a captain, la forge is not an idiot, hes a good normal officer.

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:15 pm

Ok, you've convinced me 

[Myles]

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:23 pm

Last edited by Myles on February 20th, 2010, 4:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.

really? i dont want to meddle in your creative process, i want you to make the decisions u want, i just gave my opinion that wesley crusher is an annoying character. but thats my opinion, and u should feel free to ignore it 

EDIT: signed up on your hub.

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:40 pm

what about general mayson as the captain?

you could write about how he uses his single construction ship to bring every enemy he faces to tears with his holy power of fast turret building^^

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:41 pm

what about general mayson as the captain?

Wrong branch of the Military   Mayson is an Admiral

sorry, just like to be picky

posted on February 20th, 2010, 4:43 pm

@general zaxxon: you're not really sorry

mayson would not use ships, only turrets with engines.