posted on May 15th, 2009, 1:44 pm
Hmmm, because I am very critical of other people's writing, don't take this wrong

a few spelling mistakes here and there, sentence structure is somewhat difficult to read at points (know when to use dashes as opposed to commas, as well as when to make a new sentence), it's a bit difficult to read the conversation at points because of the style. Also, remember that brevity is the soul of wit

Other than that, tis ok
