"and Now For Somthing Completly Different"

[T-Man]

posted on June 26th, 2005, 8:02 pm

Last edited by T-Man on June 30th, 2005, 7:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.

In an attempt to entertain the masses while we all wait for V3, i decided to continue one of my part-time hobbies, story writing, by writing this story. It contains aspects of FO (such as the ships) but i've also added a few ideas of my own to add originality. It's attached to this post as an HTML document.

If this story proves popular, i may write some more and post them up. Of course, i have no idea what the FO team intends, so don't consider these stories related to their storyline in any way, though if they like them, they're more than free to adapt them. For now, consider these my veiws on what would be happening in FO if it really did follow on from Armada 1.

Anyway, enjoy. Constructive criticisim is always welcome.

EDIT: First story has been changed. Now includes reference of how Martok lost his eye (thanks to cts006 for reminding me).

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posted on June 26th, 2005, 8:30 pm

nice idea.

posted on June 26th, 2005, 8:38 pm

Title edited

Nice idea ^_^
also its to late here in germany now to read it today i will deffinitely read it tomorrow looks very interesting!

[Cpt Ryan]

posted on June 26th, 2005, 8:47 pm

Last edited by Cpt Ryan on June 26th, 2005, 9:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.

nice, but the akira should have photons instead of jus phasers, ahhhhhh

has good structure to it, wonder what Toral did to get himself into this mess, hes almost comedy

posted on June 28th, 2005, 9:17 pm

Just a comment, It might make some sense to reference the jem hadar or the praticular one that took his eye instead of saying it was in one of his many battles, IMHO.

posted on June 28th, 2005, 9:35 pm

yeah didn't he lose his eye in a forced duel with one of his captors during dominion war?

posted on June 28th, 2005, 9:48 pm

Yah he did when he was in the inturnment camp, Those where 2 great epsiodes.

[T-Man]

posted on June 30th, 2005, 7:18 pm

Last edited by T-Man on June 30th, 2005, 7:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.

It might make some sense to reference the jem hadar or the praticular one that took his eye instead of saying it was in one of his many battles.

Oh yeah, I'd forgot about that. Thanks for the reminder. Reference has been added. ^_^

posted on July 1st, 2005, 1:25 am

I liked it very much, well done story. Lookin' forward to more. (Asuming your making more.)

posted on July 1st, 2005, 3:01 am

If you refer to the cival war between Gowron and the Duras where the tacyon detection grid was first implimented, and made a great episode or 2 that had sela in it, then I am almosy sure that Neg'vars did not exist in the klingon fleet at the time, during the time Gowron flew a Vor'cha class atack cruiser as his ship. The Neg'var was a ship I belive originaly created to be a new. bigger, powerfull, and more menacing flag ship for Gowron and then Martok for the klingon empire. Created for the episode Way of the warior on DS9.

posted on July 1st, 2005, 9:46 am

Thats true, it was first seen on the DS9 episode

posted on July 1st, 2005, 10:40 am

Yay, do I get a prize?

posted on July 1st, 2005, 10:49 am

*fart* *quickly catchs it in a cup and gives it to cts006* "There you go ,you earned it now take a good wiff!"

posted on July 1st, 2005, 11:25 am

*Ewww*

posted on July 1st, 2005, 11:26 am

If you refer to the cival war between Gowron and the Duras where the tacyon detection grid was first implimented...

Actually i'm running off of the Klingon Civil War outlined in Armada 1. The "backstabbing Sela" is reference to when Sela teamed up with the Borg to wipe out the last major Duras fortress (the last Romulan Mission in A1).

My theory is that Toral survived (since his death was never mentioned) and managed to rally a few remnants of the Duras family fleet, and now fights a gurilla war against the empire.

However, you are correct about the Negh'Var. I would have hold your prize high but its very hard to hold gaseous substances!