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« on: May 08, 2004, 06:55:43 PM »
Hey guys.  Havn't been able to post in awhile, and I'm sorry for that.  Life is a bitch.  But I'm back, and I have something that I would like to share with you.  Cheesy

Over the past month, I have been working on a story, specifically, a Star Trek "episode" as you might call it, although it wouldn't fit into the series of Star Trek that is currently airing.  I have only completed 3 chapters, and have shown it to only 2 of my friends so far, but they were ready to kill me for the way I ended the 3rd chapter and didn't have a continuation for the 4th chapter.  LOL   But I would like to start getting more feedback on it.  I would also like to know how to copyright it, so that no one may steal my idea.  I don't know how to do something like that.

But about the story, I have also included a little bit of a twist, that I think most, if not all of you will be baffled by.  So if any of you like a good challenge, I suggest reading this, and trying to figure it out.  If you all can figure it out, feel free to post about it in this thread, or a new one.  I need some more ideas for the 4th chapter and so on, cuz I'm kinda in the middle of writer's block.  But that's only if you can figure the plot out.  If anyone of you can figure it out, but don't want to ruin it for everyone else by posting it, feel free to email me, or contact me on MSN or AIM.  BlackFalconBlack@msn.com , or my AIM: ShadowRaven468 .   I will be updating the story regularly, as a reply to this thread, with an update attached..

So, let the adventure begin.  Wink
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« Reply #1 on: May 08, 2004, 11:25:39 PM »
ooh very good, i love it, who's the aliens?
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« Reply #2 on: May 09, 2004, 06:41:38 PM »
Ok, I made many changes to the first part of the story, that I had attached above.  I just keep updating it.  Any further attchments that are in a reply, will be conitnuations of the story, that is, if people are liking it enough.  Wink
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« Reply #3 on: May 09, 2004, 07:10:27 PM »
Cheers for sharing... not bad fan-fiction is this. I'm glad to see you haven't gone way way way over the top, lol.


There are afew minor bugs here and there, and one big one, but overall its started well. Writers block? ooooo. Hope you get over that soon...
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« Reply #4 on: May 10, 2004, 12:54:42 AM »
dude,  wooooooow :omg:  the story is amazing, but now you gotta finish it! i really wanna know what will become of them, now there's no turning back, I WANNA READ THE REST OF IT, you could at least throw us a bone about what will heapen!!
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« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2004, 04:10:22 AM »
Neat story, kinda wish Hewen had a canon ship like the next Sovern class or something but the heart is there Wink  Yes please continue with it.
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« Reply #6 on: May 13, 2004, 01:33:28 AM »
heeeheee... i know who the "enemy" is... and once u guy's get it yu'll hate yourself for not gessing it... anyway, well the writer person (i 4get his name) told me who they "enemies" are and i laughed my head off and killed myself at the same time 4 not gessing HAHAHAHAHA
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« Reply #7 on: May 13, 2004, 02:09:12 AM »
I bet it's Q or them Romulans, always with the Romulans, so predictable Wink  
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« Reply #8 on: May 14, 2004, 01:21:30 AM »
i won't spoil it unless u guys want me too, but the only way is by talking to me via E-mail (don't use msn cause i'll most likely block u) @ kaptain_kirk@hotmail.com
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« Reply #9 on: May 15, 2004, 11:55:30 AM »
This story is great but there is one major problem with it... You can't leave us hangin like that! But I wonder who those enemies are... I have my theories but... ahh, we'll see LOL  
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« Reply #10 on: May 16, 2004, 12:59:41 PM »
Yup thats a pretty good story, don't like the federation is allpowerful like that, but a very good story nontheless
 
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« Reply #11 on: May 25, 2004, 02:25:32 PM »
Dude what happened to the rest of the story??? Are you going to finish it at all?
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« Reply #12 on: May 25, 2004, 04:48:12 PM »
Don't worry, I'm workin on it.  I was stuck for awhile on how to continue it, but I think I got something now.  Should be done by the end of this week.  cheesy  
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« Reply #13 on: May 25, 2004, 08:49:46 PM »
Can't wait to see what happens next, but I kind a forgot what happened in the first part, i must remember to read it again cool

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Should be done by the end of this week. 

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« Reply #14 on: May 30, 2004, 09:00:18 PM »
Well, ive seen the start of chapter 4 and it looks realy good.
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